關於雅思寫作的失敗開頭參考

典型失敗案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

　　修改方案：開門見山 直奔主題

In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

　　Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思[微博](微博)真題)

Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life。

　Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

“見官死”開頭之二：中式英文人見人暈 (噴血指數：☆☆☆☆☆)