My view on knowledge英語作文點評

　　My view on knowledge

Samuel johnson once said,”General principles must come from books ,which,however ,must be brought to the test of real life”.

First,what i want to emphasis is that I can’t agree with his remarks any more lmed in variety of books,general principles are easily accessible to us,including knowledge about science 、society 、botany、zoology 、philosophy and so on.

However,as the saying goes,”Practice is the sole criterion for testing truth .” Other than getting general principles from books ,what’s of more significance is to put them into practice. Only after testing them in daily lives can we identify which one works or not,no matter how brilliant it , though dealing with problems using those principles ,we have the ability to know which one can benefit us more . What’s more ,once you get to familiar with knowledge by putting them into use,you’ll have a better understand of knowledge e is no doubt that you will sublimate the knowledge you’ve got from books .

In short ,attention should not be paid to acquire knowledge from books ’s the application of knowledge we got from books that counts.

點評：

在文章的開頭，運用景物描寫，為文中所寫的人和事渲染環境、提供背景，能給人以美好清新的印象。寫景的內容，可以是天氣情況、自然風光、建築設施，可以是動景靜景、遠景近景、美景劣景、大景小景等。小朋友們都愛好景物，也最喜歡寫景，這種開頭，會一下子抓住讀者，有助於增強讀者的閲讀興趣。

當然，開頭運用景物描寫，要注意三個方面：一是寫景的文字不能過多，不能一寫到景物，就沒完沒了，無始無終，結果，景物寫了很多，顯得頭大身子小，文章不勻稱；二是要重點突出，主要景物多寫一些，次要景物點一下即可，不能樣樣都寫，結果都沒有寫好；三是寫景是為人和事服務的，要與文中所寫的人和事有密切關聯，景與人事不能脱節，更不能把景物寫成了文章的累贅。

請看下面這個開頭：

瓦藍瓦藍的天，絲絲縷縷的輕雲如煙般繚繞，夕陽的光輝灑滿田間，萬條金線接天浮動，玫瑰色的光彩，映在綠得發黑的菜上，葉面上像抹了一層油，亮閃閃的。

這段文字，是習作《路過天堂》的開頭，用的全是景物描寫，主要是仰視之景，夕陽下的.美景，藍天、輕雲、夕照的光彩、碧綠的菜葉，渲染了美好的情境，為寫“我”下文“路過天堂寨”提供了優美的環境背景。讀後有身臨其境之感，令人心馳神往，顯然是一個好的開頭。