我的母親大學優秀英語作文

when i sat at the desk,trying to write the essay,i found it hard to set pen to ing at the topic i deliberately chose for myself my mother,i felt the memory of 20 years with my mother suddenly turned into a haze,blurring my eyes to discern the past,with nothing towering,nothing flaring,nothing impressive or special enough as a haze gradually cleared away,revealing the image of an amicable woman.i recalled a line from the famous movie sleepless in radio column hostess asked sam,whats so special about your wife?he answered,thats millions of small t,trivial and commonplace,like obscure beans,yet woven into the most spectacular necklace by the power of mother is ordinary,but in my eyes she is special.

my mother gave birth to me with eceptionally difficult er received an emergency notice and was faced with a choice between the adult and the course,the my coming into this world was an unepected fortune at the price of mothers painful my 20 years began like this my mother eerted every effort to give me love,but i returned her with a deep scar that was to stay with her all through my growth.

my mother is a senior high school english r standably,she wanted her daughter to pick up english early to give her an edge to later study,which i did not understand at the age of eight.i was so obsessed with fun and games that i hated to stay peacefully with all those strange phonetic symbols and odd words.i wondered what pleasure mother seemed to have found in teaching me a,b,t teaching at school tire some enough for her?i went on strike,refusing to spell a single word no matter how tender or severe mother tried to be with the first time in my life,mother beat me,imprinting on my physical pain was gone long,long i have finally come to understand how it pained my mother to beat me for my obstinacy and disobedience,and i ache at her pain.

mother never gave up evoking in me an interest in placed the most emphasis on my education and took the most pleasure in my gradual formation of self-discipline in preparing myself for future ks to her effort and influence,i have been doing well,not only in english,but also in my positive attitudes and conviction towards life.

now i am so grateful to my mother for everything she has taught me,but at that time it was far beyond my a little girl,i thought of my mother as meticulous and my father as a best playmate.i still remember i wrote in my elementary school a composition dedicated to my father about how he cared for rally mother felt she was ignored,so i wrote another one for mother,intending to tell her she was so good a teacher that she sometimes had only students on mind and neglected her ectedly,mother was gloomed and her eyes went wet.i am so sorry now for that affected composition.i am mothers daughter,and i am mothers student.i could never be neglected by mother,because i am the forever scar on her body,the forever pain on her mind,yet the forever bliss in her life.

i did not write much in the past about mothers love for y,this essay is for her,and for her only.i wish to let her know my regret and gratitude.i wish she could hear,i love you,mother.

簡評

古往今來，人們都説，母愛是世界上最偉大的愛。作者通過回憶歷歷往事，用她深情的筆調，為我們譜寫了又一首歌頌母親的'讚歌，刻畫了一位平凡而偉大的母親的生動形象，讓我們又一次領略到母親無私奉獻的崇高精神。

該散文文筆優美，語言純正，聲情並茂，感人肺腑，願天下所有的兒女都能像作者一樣真正感受到舐犢情深，並回報這份濃厚、純潔的母愛。

當然，本文在事例具體、內容充實方面還有進一步改進的餘地。母親的形象也似乎略欠豐滿。