2016年12月英語六級作文練習

歷年英語四六級考試中，許多考生在作文上失分較多，作文雖然不是考試難點，但是各位考生也不能就此忽視作文。以下是yjbys網小編整理的關於英語六級作文練習，供大家備考。

　　【審題構思】

這是一篇圖畫類作文，要求考生描述圖畫，並做出評論。此類作文一般為三段式。即第一段簡單描述圖畫的內容及內涵，第二段就圖畫的`內容展開評論，並表明自己的觀點，第三段重申自己的看法並提出建議。考生在評論和表明自己的觀點時，一定要思路清晰，且要表達清楚。

　　【參考範文】

In the picture above, a child flies from one cage to the other cage like a cage is named school, and the other is named cram school. What a sarcastic picture. There is no freedom left for the children who cannot enjoy the supposed cheerful vacation.

Why cannot the children enjoy the vacation that belongs to them? Who push the children from one cage to the other? What should we do to help the trapped children? The three questions solved, the above picture will not exist any more. The answer to the first question is hidden with the superficial one being acquiring more knowledge, and the fundamental one is that parents demand more scores from their children. They expect their children to be able to score more through attending various cram schools at the cost of their children’s supposedly splendid vocation. So it is the parents who pursue quick success that push the children from one cage to the other. To free the children, the parents should put emphasis on the children’s physical and mental health rather than the score.

As is known to all that pursuit of high scores has long been a phenomenon in China, the cause of this phenomenon is hard to be uprooted. Therefore, we should emancipate the children in the mind and return the joy of childhood to children gradually.

【高分詞彙與詞組】

supposed 本該的

trapped 受困的

attend various cram schools 參加各種輔導班

pursue quick success 急功近利

【句型替換】

To free the children, the parents should put emphasis on the children’s physical and mental health rather than the score.

=To set the children free , the parents should emphasize the children’s physical and mental well-being rather than the score.

As is known to all that pursuit of high scores has long been a phenomenon in China, the cause of this phenomenon is hard to be uprooted.

=As we all know that pursuing high scores has long been a phenomenon in China, the cause of this phenomenon is hard to be eradicated.