2015年12月英語四級作文範文彙總

Directions: Write a composition entitled Ideals. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 人人都有理想;

2. 實現理想的因素是什麼;

3. 你的理想及實現的途徑。

　　【經典範文】

　　Ideals

Everyone has his ideals. A businessman wishes to make greater profit; a farmer expects plumper harvests; a student tries to learn more and better. And

However, one should be sensible about whether his ideal is well founded or not. If it is, one has to plan and work hard for its realization. Effort, skill and persistence are all necessary. And very often, one has to get help from others, including advice and support in one form or another.

My ideal is to become a doctor. It is said that the field of medicine is a well-paid profession, but I take it as a lofty profession entrusted with saving people’s lives. To realize my ideal I have concentrated on laboratory work to develop the analytical skills necessary to become a qualified doctor. Ijm sure^willjiealizejm^jidealjifrperseverejinjthisjpursuit. (156 words)

　　【譯文賞析】 理想

人人都有理想。商人的理想是賺取更大的利潤;農民希望獲得更大 的豐收;學生則爭取學得更多、更好。每個人都為實現理想多多少少付 出了努力。

然而，人們應該想想自己的理想是否建立在紮實的基礎上。如果是， 那麼人們就必須為實現理想而做出計劃、辛勤工作。努力、技巧和恆心 都是必備要素。人們還常常需要從別人身上獲得幫助，包括各種形式的 建議和支持。

我的.理想是成為一名醫生。醫師是一個薪水不錯的職業，而我則視 之為一個治病救人的高尚職業。為了實現我的理想，我必須集中精力於 實驗室的工作，從而培養作為一名合格醫師所必備的分析技巧。若能持 之以恆，我相信我能實現自己的理想。

　　【詞彙表達亮點】

strive v.努力，奮鬥

with more or less effort 用或多或少的努力

realize v. 實現

be sensible about.意識到

persistence n.堅持

it is said that.據説

well-paid adj.收入高的，待遇優厚的

lofty adj.高尚的

entrust with...委託給某人

concentrate on. 集中注意力於

analytical adj.分析的

qualified adj.合格的

persevere in 堅持

pursuit n.追求;職業

　　下面對四級作文的真題命題規律進行解析的同時，逐一進行了解析並提供了參考範文，供廣大考生參考。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start you essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the kid’s understanding of going to school. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 150 words。

　　手機與上學

　　命題解析

本題要求首先簡要描述圖畫，然後評論這個孩子對上學的理解。圖畫顯示：一個小孩問母親：如果我的手機已經知道一切，為什麼我還要上學呢?顯而易見，本題主旨為手機是否可以取代上學。

國內寫作考試中已經反覆考察手機這一熱點話題。2009年MBA[微博]寫作考察“手機短信”，2010年考研[微博]英語(二)寫作考察“手機入網”，2013年12月四級寫作考察“手機在人們生活中越來越多的使用”，也考查了“網絡對學習的影響，以及教育是否僅僅是獲得信息”。2014年12月，考研英語(一)寫作再次考察“手機時代的‘聚會’”。如果考生研究過之前的寫作真題，諸多表達均可使用。本題尤其和13年12月四級寫作考察的“網絡對學習的影響”異曲同工，幾乎就是原題重考。

　　寫作思路：

1、本題首段應簡要描述圖畫，指出當代有些年輕人認為手機可以取代上學。

2、次段最好進行正反論證，説明手機雖然可以幫助獲得大量信息，但無法取代教育，教育絕非僅僅是獲取信息。

3、第三段最好提出建議措施：我們應該合理使用手機，同時學校教育必不可少、不可或缺。

　　參考範文：

It is subtly revealed in the portrayal that a young boy is talking with his mother in their house. The boy asks confusingly, “Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?”

We often hear of successful people who are largely “self-taught”. I say largely because, in all cases, they have received some formal teaching, whether it was from a teacher in a classroom, or from parents or a relative at home. In my case, I am glad I always learned from teachers, from fist grade all the way through my Master’s degree. A good teacher adds considerably to the materials contained in the textbooks。

In conclusion, it takes a great deal of self-discipline to learn a subject via mobile phones with only self-study, having no guidance or instruction from a teacher. A skilled and talented teacher can add so much richness to what is being learned. I believe it is always better to have a teacher to some degree。

如圖所示，一個小孩正在家中和他的母親談話。這個男孩疑惑地問：“如果我的手機已經知道一切了，我為什麼還要去上學呢?”

我們常聽人説某某成功人士多半靠“自學”成才。 之所以説“多半”是因為所有的成功人士都曾接受過正規教育，有的是在教室裏聽老師講課，有的是在家裏由父母或親屬給上課。拿我來説，我很慶幸從大一一直到碩士研究生畢業我都在跟着老師學。一位好的老師可以教給你許多課本材料以外的東西。

總之，在沒有老師指點的情況下，通過手機自學一門學科需要嚴格的自律。而一位經驗豐富且有才華的教師能教給你許多書本知識以外的東西。所以我想，在某種程度上，有老師教總歸更好。