2023四級英語寫作應用技巧

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在平時的學習中,是不是聽到知識點,就立刻清醒了?知識點是指某個模塊知識的重點、核心內容、關鍵部分。哪些才是我們真正需要的知識點呢?下面是小編為大家收集的2023四級英語寫作應用技巧,供大家參考借鑑,希望可以幫助到有需要的朋友。

2023四級英語寫作應用技巧

Success is the continuous journey towards the achievement of predetermined worth while goals live your life in your own way reach the goals , you’ve set for yourself . To be the person, you want to be ——that is success .

少用"and"和鬆散句

鬆散句在文章中隨處可見,難以消亡。鬆散句在語法上並沒錯誤,它只是太長,且干擾讀者對文章的理解,不幸的是,犯有此類毛病的作者往往屢見不鮮。對此可遵循一條好的原則:如果發現一個句子長及兩到三行,則仔細考慮兩遍,它很可能要徹底改動。

Rambling: The plane was ready to take off; having never traveled by plane before he suddenly felt nervous as the sky ominously turned from gray to black, and threatening bolts of lightning shot across the sky, and thunder echoed in the distance.

Better: The plane was ready to take off. He had never traveled by plane and suddenly felt nervous as the sky turned ominously from gray to black. Threatening bolts of lightening shot across the sky, and thunder echoed in the distance.

Rambling: We regret to inform you that inclement weather conditions in our area have caused us to reschedule all deliveries for the month of February so that we must also reschedule shipment of your order to February 16.

Better: I’m sorry to let you know that a winter storm will delay shipment of your order until February 16.

鬆散句經常有很多"and"。

在口語中,尚可多用幾個"and" 但若過多地出現在書面英語中,則令人難以接受。取代"and"的方法是改用逗號或從屬結構,或者乾脆省略。

Plain: The Governor of Hong Kong descended the long and winding staircase.

Interesting: The Governor of Hong Kong descended the long, winding staircase.

Plain: My grandparents spent long summer hours under the old, tall and shady tree in the courtyard.

Interesting: My grandparents spent long summer hours under the old, tall, shady tree in the courtyard.

Plain: By attending this workshop, you will learn just which cosmetic essentials you need and which formulas are just your style.

Interesting: By attending this workshop, you will learn just which cosmetic essentials you need, which formulas are just your style.

Plain: To a man harassed by a nagging wife and undisciplined children, work away from home can be a great blessing, and a welcome escape.

Interesting: To a man harassed by a nagging wife and undisciplined children, work away from home can be a great blessing, a welcome escape.

Ineffective: The Yangtze River is one of the longest rivers in the world, and in the springtime it occasionally overflows its banks, and many people are endangered.

Improved: The Yangtze River, one of the longest rivers in the world, occasionally endangers many people during the springtime by overflowing its banks.

Ineffective: The village had a population of seven thousand, and a typhoon struck it, and it was practically demolished.

Improved: The village, with its seven thousand people, was struck by a typhoon and practically demolished.

Ineffective: He was the mayor of the town, and he was a genial fellow, and he invited the four young boys into his study.

Improved: The mayor of the town, a genial fellow, invited the four young boys into his study.

Ineffective: The central plain holds Switzerland’s major manufacturing facilities and many of them specialize in high-quality and precision products.

Improved: The central plain holds Switzerland’s major manufacturing facilities, many of them specializing in high-quality, precision products.

Plain: I had always wanted to go to college, and I had always wished to become an engineer, and so I enrolled at Dalian University of Science and Technology

Interesting: Because I had always wanted to enter college and prepare myself to become an engineer, I enrolled at Dalian University of Science and Technology.

Or Better:

I enrolled at Dalian University of Science and Technology to achieve my double purpose of attending college and becoming an engineer.

Plain: Near the center of the campus of our university a new building has been erected, and it is constructed of red brick.

Better: A red-brick building has been erected near the center of our university campus.

四級作文評分標準

各檔次描述如下:

14分檔:切題,表達思想清楚,文字通順連貫,基本上無語言錯誤,僅有個別小錯。

11分檔:切題。表達思想清楚,文字連貫,但有少量語言錯誤。

8分檔:基本切題,有些地方表達思想不夠清楚,文字勉強連貫,語言錯誤相當多,其中有一些是嚴重錯誤,

5分檔:基本切題,表達思想不清楚,連貫性差,有較多的嚴重語言錯誤。

2分檔:條理不清,思路紊亂,語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤,且多數為嚴重錯誤。

四級作文通用句型精選

It is clear that the enemy has no desire for peace.

It is hard to imagine how Edison managed to work twenty hours each hard to say whether the plan is practicable.

There is no doubt that you will be helped by others if you have any difficulties.

It seems certain that they have made a series of is said that bats have been using radar for millions of years.

To tell the truth, many mistakes we made could have been avoided.

四級作文答題注意事項

01.四級作文寫不寫題目?

明確要求(如entitled,title之類的字眼)要寫

未明確要求可寫可不寫(最好不寫,寫了也沒事)

注意:寫對不加分;而拼寫錯誤或題目跑題,倒扣分!

02. 作文段前要空格嗎?

英文寫作一般有兩種:

齊頭式:不空格,但段與段之間要空一行。(電子版一般是這種格式)

縮進式:段前空兩格,段間不空行。(推薦格式)

考試的時候,推薦大家最好用縮進式,也就是段前空兩格,段與段之間不空行的格式。

當你在考場糾結的時候,兩種均可,但要統一。

03.寫錯字母要整個詞劃掉嗎?

首先,卷面要整潔,字跡要工整,層次清楚。如果出現書寫模糊,塗改多處,字跡難以辨認的情況,給老師的第一印象分就不好。

提問:寫錯字母,要整個單詞劃掉?還是劃掉錯誤字母接着寫?

答疑:如圖,上面的更好,更整齊;與高中英語卷面處理有區別,儘量少塗改!

04.用模版到底好不好?

作文完全沒有模板痕跡、渾然天成,當然是最好的,但如果有模板痕跡,只要內容與題目要求契合且表達正確,也完全不影響得分,甚至高分。

無論是四級還是考研寫作,絲毫沒有模板痕跡當然更好,但有模板痕跡不是罪,只要你寫的不是廢話、與題目要求契合且正確,就一定能得分,如果還有亮點精彩之處,是完全可能得稍微高點的分數的。"

開頭寫作技巧

1、引用型

(1) A famous saying goes that... It means that.

(2) There is an old saying that... It’s the experience of our forefathers.

(3) The good proverb “…” reminds us that...

(4) One of the great early writers/scientists said/remarked that..;

(5) One of our ancient philosophers said... Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality.

(6) “...” Such is the opinion of... This view has been shared by many people.

(7) “...” That’s how someone described...

(8) The English proverb says, “...” This is quite true because...

(9) As it is known to all,

(10) As we all know,

(11) As a saying goes,

(12) As sb. puts it,

(13) It is often said that,

(14) As the proverb says,

2、圖表説明型

(1) From the graph/chart, we know the statistics of... and... It can be easily seen that...

(2) The figure of the graph/table shows that...

(3) The first graph shows us.... At the same time, the other shows that...

(4) According to the two graphs presented, it can be observed that...

(5) According to the figure/number/statistics in the table/chart, it can be seen that...

(6) The figure indicates/shows/suggests/proves that... There is a rapid development/trend of...

(7) As can be seen from/in the table/graph, there was a/an (very) slight/ sharp/rapid increase/decrease/reduction in...

(8) As (is) shown in Table 1/Figure 1, there was a gradual/sudden rise/decline in...

(9) A close study of the chart shows...

(10) From the two graphs it may be inferred that...

(11) As the figures indicate that...

3、説明現象、問題型

(1) In recent years, … has become...

(2) Nowadays, ... plays an important role in our life.

(3) Now many people prefer... because it has a significant role in our daily life.

(4) Nowadays, we are experiencing...

(5) Now the phenomenon/problem of... has aroused great/wide concern in China.

(6) In recent years, there is a sudden increase...

(7) Currently there is a growing tendency to/in...

(8) In recent years, we have to face a problem that...

(9) Recently the problem... has been brought into focus/brought to public attention.

(10) One of the most serious problems many people talk about/complain is...

(11) A virtual epidemic of.. . is now under way in the society/country.

(12) ... is yet another of the new and bitter truths we have to face now.

(13) Man is now facing with a big problem..., which is becoming more and more serious.

(14) With the development of modern industry, more and more people are concerned about the problem...

(15) Perhaps most dangerous/harmful for our society/college is the tendency!

phenomenon of. . . which, is obvious /evident in..

(16) Today, the world is faced with the problem...

(17) In recent few years, there is a sharp increase/decline in...

(18) In the past few years, a trend of... has been becoming more and more clear.

(19) It seems that the whole society is talking about... 4、對立觀點型

(1) Some people are inclined to... for the following reasons.

(2) Some people think that... They claim that...

(3) Some people believe that... They point out the fact that...

(4) Now it is widely believed that...

(5) These days we often hear about...

(6) We are often shown that...

(7) Some people tend to... while they are asked... (8) When asked about.., some people say that...

(9) Nowadays, ... becomes popular in our daily life.

(10) . . . is a common occurrence in our lives.

(11) When it comes to... some people think...

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