2015年6月大學英語四級滿分作文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and comment on parents’ role in their children’s growth. You should write at least 120 but no more than 180 words.

　　破題思路：

第一段：漫畫描述，重點是母女之間的對話內容，從而引出文章的主題是有關孩子的獨立性，家長干涉孩子過多。

第二段：可以分析此現象產生的原因。

第三段：採取措施解決此現象。

　　參考範文：

How impressive the cartoon is in describing the most widespread social phenomenon concerning the independence of the children. Let’s take a closer look at the drawing, the girl told her mother she was accepted by the university of her mother’s choice with pride. The author’s real purpose is not the drawing itself, but to lead us to secure what hides behind the picture.

What are the reasons for it? In the following sentences, I’ll venture to explore the reasons. To start with, the only-one child policy in China has made more and more parents pay much attention to their children that they would like to replace their children to do everything. In addition, parents don’t believe that their children have enough ability to deal with their personal matters and make any decisions.

There are some suggestions given to our parents. For one thing, it is quite important for our parents to realize that their children will grow up and have their own ideas as time goes by. For another, children should be encouraged to make some decisions alone so that they are able to pursue what they really want. I contend that our parents should give their children a free hand in some matters to help them to be independent.

　　參考譯文：

多麼令人印象深刻的漫畫是最普遍的社會現象在描述關於孩子的獨立性。讓我們仔細看看圖紙,這個女孩告訴她媽媽她接受了她母親的選擇大學的驕傲。作者的真正目的不是繪畫本身,而是讓我們安全的背後隱藏了什麼。

它的原因是什麼?在下列句子,我會冒險探索的原因。首先,中國只有一個孩子的政策使得越來越多的家長關注自己的孩子,他們想取代他們的孩子做所有的事。此外,父母不相信孩子有足夠的`能力來處理他們的個人問題和做出任何決定。

有一些建議給我們的父母。首先,它是非常重要的我們的父母意識到孩子長大,隨着時間的推移,有自己的想法。另一方面,應該鼓勵孩子獨自做決定,這樣他們可以追求自己真正想要的是什麼。我認為父母應該給孩子一個自由的手在一些問題,以幫助他們獨立。