2016新託福獨立寫作中間段構思方法詳解

託福寫作中間段也要特別注意，平常我們看到的最多的是開頭和結尾段的寫法，關於中間段的卻不多。實際上，託福獨立寫作中間段的寫作技巧也相當重要，如果中間段不充實，無論開頭結尾如何華麗，託福作文依舊得不到好分數。下面，小編帶大家來看一看“新託福獨立寫作中間段如何構思”，希望對大家有所幫助。

1.Q：一定需要三大段論點理由展開來證明開頭觀點嗎?

A：No. 中間段可以有一個論點展開,也可以拿到滿分. 同學們可以參看ETS的第三版 p202頁的`官方範文5分和4分範文賞析. 但是, 如果有兩個至三個理由來證明開頭觀點更好, 所以平時同學們要多練習Brainstorming快速找理由寫提綱.

2.Q: 獨立寫作中間段的結構是什麼?

A: 論點Main pointSentence+論據Details. 儘量不要突兀地寫forexample, 需要指明例子之前的論點句. 其中論點句指的是證明開頭段中觀點的理由, 論據則是該理由的細節展示.

比如:論點Main point Sentence: Anotheradvantage of living with an American family is that the students are in anideal environment to improve his English.

論據Details: For example,each time he has a conversation with someone in the family, thisnative speaker can help him with the pronunciation and grammar. Maybe theyounger children in the family can help him with his homework, too. But themost important thing is that he will be surrounded by English most of timeduring his stay in the United States.

3.Q: 怎麼展開一箇中間段落才能做到評分標準5分要求呢?

A: 其實有很多方法將論點展開Details, 比如: 我強化班會重點介紹的幾種: Specific personal example 少而精的個人經歷; General example 多而簡的寬泛例子羅列; compare& contrast對比反差; Study &Survey 調查數據; Famous people權威名人; Quotation名言諺語等.

4.Q: 獨立寫作中間段的論據如果想寫個人經歷, 應該怎樣寫才算高分?

A: 注意個人經歷內容寫到精確具體, 語言做到準確地道形象. 比如:

論點: English does not seem to be spoken by Americansin the same way that it was presented in my textbooks.

個人經歷: Take myself for example, the first time I asked anAmerican a question, I got a strange response. The man who answered my questionsaid something sounded like “dunno”. I was sure that I had never studiedthis expression in my textbooks, and I could not find anything like this indictionary. Eventually, I was surprised to learn later from a friend that this wasnothing more than a shorten version of “I do not know”.

5.Q:以上是不是每種方法都要在獨立寫作中間段用上?

A: 這幾種方法都是平行關係, 可以挑選一種方法即可展開一個論點句. 當然, 也可以挑選其中兩三種方法使得一個段落展開地非常細緻.

6.Q: 獨立寫作是不是中間段字數越多越好?

A: 展開的Details的語言部分非常重要, 比如由電腦自動評分E-rater主要評判Grammar, Usage, Style, Mechanics, Lexical complexity等方面.

7.Q: 獨立寫作的中間段是不是一定需要 ”辨證式/反證式/讓步式” 寫法?

A: 有這種辯證式思路文章會寫得更全面, 但是這不是必要的. 因為ETS的官方指南和評分標準告訴大家: 託福寫作考的並不是該同學對一個觀點分析有多麼深刻, 主要是語言的表達和內容的清晰. 但是學會讓步式寫法在託福獨立寫作中也很有好處, 特別是當展開論點理由不夠時.