托福考試的英語作文模板

小編寄語：對於那些剛入門的考生來説，託福作文是最讓人頭疼的，在基礎入門階段最重要的就是全面理解託福寫作，抓住考試要求點，按照主次步驟，循序漸進，一定會取得好成績的。以下就是小編整理英語作文常出現的問題，建議同學們從以下五個關鍵步驟入手：

1.仔細審題，分析提示句，明確三方面問題

切題是寫好文章最重要的前提。有的考生抱怨，自己感覺文章內容豐富、語言生動流暢，得分卻不高。其實，文章跑題是分數偏低的主要原因。因此，審好題、審清題在很大程度上關係到整篇文章的成敗，絕不可以掉以輕心。審題，不僅要仔細研究題目，還要結合給出的提示句加以分析。首先要明確文章要寫的內容，即文章要圍繞什麼主題來寫，這是保證整篇文章切題的關鍵;其次，確定文章所需的主語人稱，人稱混亂是中國學生常犯的一個毛病，而在審題階段確定人稱是避免文章人稱混亂的有效途徑;第三，注意文章對動詞的時態、語氣有無特殊要求。

2.圍繞提示句，構建文章框架

草擬提綱時，要緊緊圍繞提示句，尤其是提示句的關鍵詞，儘量多地擴展提示句所提供的信息，從而基本構築出文章的框架。在擴展提示句時，要注意，可以原封不動地照抄提示句中的關鍵詞，但是絕對不要照搬提示句中的詞組和句子，一定要變換意思相同的表達進行替換，這是顯示考生語言應用能力的重要一環。為了避免段落內容跑題，要從提示句中的關鍵詞出發，圍繞關鍵詞開拓思路，發揮聯想，記錄下所聯想到的東西：可以是句子，也可以是詞組;可以是英語，也可以是漢語。然後對所記錄的內容進行篩選，選擇最有代表性的內容草擬出文章的提綱。

3.依據所擬提綱，寫出全文主旨句及段落主題句

全文主旨句(thesis statement)涵蓋全文的核心內容，而段落主題句(topic sentence)則是統領段落中心內容的。段落主題句是為全文主旨句服務的。很多同學對全文主旨句缺乏瞭解，甚至無法區分全文主旨句和段落主題句。提出全文主旨時，應注意下面的'問題：

1)主旨通常是一個包含所寫的主旨要義，即中心思想的單一的陳述句;

2)主旨對文章的展開加以限制;

3)主旨不能用短語、從句、或疑問句;

4)主旨應該明確具體，但主旨如果過於具體化就無法展開文章的寫作;

5)同一個標題可以有不同的主旨，所選主旨必須側重標題的某一不同方面的內容;

6)主旨必須揭示作者的觀點和態度。

　　優秀範文：

People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

People attend colleges or universities for a lot of different reasons. I believe that the three most common reasons are to prepare for a career, to have new experiences, and to increase their knowledge of themselves and the world around them.

Career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, this is the primary reason to go to college, They know that the job market is competitive. At college, they can learn new skill for careers with a lot of opportunities. This means careers, such as information technology, that are expected to need a large workforce in the coming years.

Also, students go to colleges and universities to have new experiences. This often means having the opportunity to meet people different from those in their hometowns. For most students, going to college is the first time they've been away from home by themselves. In additions, this is the first time they've had to make decisions on their own. Making these decisions increases their knowledge of themselves.

Besides looking for self-knowledge, people also attend a university or college to expand their knowledge in subjects they find interesting. For many, this will be their last chance for a long time to learn about something that doesn't relate to their career.

I would recommend that people not be so focused on a career. They should go to college to have new experiences and learn about themselves and the world they live in.