2017年會考英語寫作範文以及點評

面對即將到來的會考，很多考生對英語寫作還是心裏沒底。這裏小編特地送上實用的會考英語寫作範文，並附以點評，希望對大家有所幫助。

　2017年會考英語寫作範文1

Why Are Trees important?

Trees are very important to us. Do you know why? Let me tell you.

Trees take in carbon dioxide from the air and make oxygen. That's important. People and animals need oxygen to live. Many small animals and insects live in the trees. Some of them also get food from trees. Trees can also stop water and soil from going away. If we have a lot of trees, we stop deserts from being large. I think this is very important. You know, trees are green. They can make our country even more beautiful.

Trees are our good friends. We should plant more trees and take good care of them.

點評：文章先闡明論點，接着論證，最後重申自己的'觀點。

2017年會考英語寫作範文2

It's Our Duty To Protect Our Environment

It's our duty to protect our environment. Where we live? The earth. The earth is the only one place we live in. So you know how important the environment is. But now, some people are harming the environment, like cutting down trees, drawing pictures on public walls, littering onto the ground. It's terrible if we still do it. Now, it's time for all the people in the society to protect the environment. It's our duty. It needs each of us to make a contribution to improving the environment. We should make our environment more and more beautiful.

點評：作者多用學過的詞語不但保證了正確，還鞏固了所學的知識，並且注意句型的多樣化，如長句，短句，疑問句，使用了“if，so, now, but”等詞，整篇文章讀起來朗朗上口。實際上，寫文章就像串珠子，連接詞就在於把一個個單詞串起來。

現在，根據以上的範文和點評，我們可以總結出以下的觀點：