2016年雅思寫作優秀範文

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　作文一：

We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in businesses, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes.

What things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we he more auspicious of their benefits?

　Model Answer:

Computers are a relatively new invention. The first computers were built fifty years ago and it is only in the last thirty or so years that their influence has affected our everyday life. Personal computers were introduced as recently as the early eighties. In this short time they have made a tremendous impact on our lives. We are now so dependent on computers that it is hard to imagine what things would be like today without them. You have only got to go into a bank when their main computer is broken to appreciate the chaos that would occur if computers were suddenly removed world-wide.

In the future computers will be used to create bigger and even more sophisticated computers. The prospects for this are quite alarming. They will be so complex that no individual could hope to understand how they work. They will bring a lot of benefits but they will also increase the potential for unimaginable chaos. They will, for example, be able to fly planes and they will be able to co ordinate the movements of several planes in the vicinity of an airport. Providing all the computers are working correctly nothing can go wrong. If one small program fails disaster.

There is a certain inevitability that technology will progress and become increasingly complex. We should, however, ensure that we are still in a position where we are able to control technology. It will be all too easy to suddenly discover that technology is controlling us. By then it might be too late I believe that it is very important to be suspicious of the benefits that computers will bring and to make sure that we never become totally dependent on a completely technological world.

　作文二：

Task：Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　Sample answer:

The advent of computer technology has shaped the landscape of many traditional industries,among which the public library is the one that has been unprecedentedly ough the concern and worry for fading dominance of library is not unwarranted,I still believe the maintenance of public libraries is necessary.

Libraries, though not so easily accessible as the digital books backed by the computer technology,can create an atmosphere which can sooth readers and then make them more concentrate on reading and piles of books,ranging from literature ones such as novels,poems and proses to the non-literature counterparts such as encyclopedias, history books and so on will give readers a sense of solemn and they are likely to treat reading as a holy baptism stimulating their cognitive development. In comparison,when readers get some information by e-books,they may regard it as a spiritual fast food,thereby absorbing little but to idle away time.

Another point for continue to run public libraries is that the functions of libraries is not restricted to do some readings; instead,it is now a multi-functional complex in which the visitors can attend an academic lecture,exchange opinions on some issues with participants in some seminars or receive some professional training and experience can hardly be obtained through some e-books or online courses,which may mainly focus on the presentation of knowledge itself rather than the communication of those who are engaged in it.

Of course,cost of the maintenance of public libraries is one point that undermines the predominance of the virtual digital world ， cost can be reduced because of less spending on personnel and premises,making the price of some e-books more access to abundant resources is also magnetic to some readers,especially who need to keep pace with the latest information.

In conclusion,public libraries still our attention and effort to maintain its operation,in spite of the rising importance of digital libraries.

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