托福考試作文如何簡潔精練
託福寫作中我們該儘量讓文章言簡意賅,用詞精準。小編就此為大家講述託福作文如何簡化,希望對大家有所幫助。
為了避免句子冗長,通常採取兩種辦法,一種是將一個長句子,劃分為幾個短句子,每個短句子之間有語氣上的停頓,讓聽話人有間歇的感覺,另外一種則是簡化句子的單詞構成,用一些簡單的單詞,代替一些複雜的單詞。下面我就給各位介紹三種常用的簡化方法。
第一種方法是用一個單詞代替一組意義相同的單詞,比如:
①用forget(忘記)代替do not remember(沒有記住)
②用ignore(忽視)代替do not pay attention to(不注意)
③用now(現在)代替at this point in time(此時此刻)
④用because(由於)代替due to the fact that(鑑於下列事實)
第二種方法是省略同義詞或近義詞,比如在下面例句中,形容詞important(重要的)和significant(有重要意義的),就是兩個同義詞(也可以說是近義詞),我們可以省略important,只保留significant。
①The government project is important and significant.(這項政府計劃是重要的,有重要意義。)
②The government project is significant.(這項政府計劃有重要意義。)
第三種方法是在不改變句子含義的前提下,省略所有可以省略的單詞,比如在下面例句中,the cover of the book (書的封面)可以省略成the book cover,is red in color(是紅色的)可以省略成is red。
①The cover of the book is red in color.(書的封面是紅色的)
②The book cover is red.(書的封面是紅色的)
最後我們把這三種方法結合起來,將一個冗長、繞嘴的句子,改寫成一個簡短、易懂的句子。
①University malls must be accessible and free from congestion in order that students, faculty and employees may have unobstructed passage through those areas of the campus.(校內道路必須是便於通行的,不擁堵的,以便讓學生、教師和職員能夠無阻礙地通過,到達校園的各處。)
②University malls must be free enough from congestion to allow people to walk through easily.(校內道路不應當擁堵,以便人們順利通行。)
以上內容就是讓你的託福寫作更簡潔的一些建議,希望大家作個參考,不要讓過於複雜的難句變成你文章的冗雜部分,那樣不僅增加了因為語法問題失分的可能性,也會對你的作文大打折扣,寫作要量力而為,要知道,漂亮的文章不僅僅是靠複雜句堆砌而成的。
拓展閱讀:託福寫作高價值詞彙整理
殘忍的,野蠻的--ferocious bloodthirsty brutal cruel fierce vicious wild
atrocious
邪惡的,有害的,致命的—sinister, a sinister smile. diabolic corrupt forbidding可怕的, 令人難親近的 pernicious
virulent
祕密的,偷偷的--cryptic含有隱義的; 晦澀難懂的; 神祕的 furtive, furtive movements偷偷摸摸的, 鬼鬼祟祟的, 祕密的 covert隱蔽的; 不公開的; 祕密的: covered hidden hideaway shelter , sneak
veileds避難所--asylum haven home institution refuge shelter harbor
節約的--frugal
浪費的,揮霍的—prodigal(They are prodigal in their expenditures) extravagant lavish spendthrift wasteful squander
浪費時間,逗弄,嬉戲--dally dawdle delay lag linger loiter
祝福,感謝--benediction bless bliss blessing
欺騙,詐騙—deceive
hoodwink
逃避工作—nger 裝病(以逃避工作或責任)goldbrick逃避勤務的士兵 relinquish 放棄
揭密,洩漏--uncover disclose expose open reveal unmask
掠奪,搶劫--loot predate rob pillage plunder sack spoil despoil burglarize
angle
誹謗,中傷--aspersion slander derogate calumniate libel discredit denigrate
讚揚--extol compliment glorify laud praise commend acclaim eulogize eucomium
頌詞,表揚--laud eulogy ode hymn
反對,不贊成--demur deprecate dissent dissident
否認,拒絕,駁斥-- contradict dispute refute renounce naysay reject
repudiate gainsay
哀悼,後悔,哀嘆--deplore bemoan regret lament dirge bewail repent
驅逐,出境--deport banish expel expatriate evict exile oust exclude
ostracism
居住--dwell abide reside inhabit occupy
誇張,吹牛--vaunt exaggerate bombast overstate full-blown overdo magnify
amplify
誇張的--stilted lofty
活潑的--vivacious active animated brisk dynamic energetic exuberant gay
lively
惡作劇的,頑皮的--prankish naughty impish elfish devilish mischievous puckish
笨拙的,麻煩的--cumbersome bulky burdensome clumsy troublesome unmanageable
bothersome gauche antic awkward ham-handed
騷亂,騷動--agitation bother commotion fret stir riot squall
大風暴--tempest violence storm
大混亂,大災難--havoc calamity catastrophe misfortune disaster mishap tragedy
巨大的,驚人的--prodigious colossal enormous extraordinary gigantic huge
immense mammoth vast tremendous
例外的,奇特的,罕見的--exceptional remarkable stupendous
奇妙的,不可思議的--miraculous wonderful marvelous
大膽的,莽撞的--audacious bold brave daring gallant heroic valiant prowess