托福考試作文寫不長怎麼辦

很多考生在做托福考試的作文部分時，出現寫不長的情況要怎麼辦才好呢?下面我們就來看看托福考試作文寫不長的處理方法，歡迎大家閲讀!

第一篇綜合寫作需要對學術短文和教授講座進行語意轉述，要求在20分鐘內寫出150-225字的學術報告。能看懂聽懂是很重要的，需要配合閲讀和聽力基礎。

第二篇獨立寫作需要就某個日常話題發表個人看法寫一篇300字以上的議論文，話題的準備和語言的準確以及多變很重要。

相比較而言，第二篇作文是很多學生在託福備考的過程中的難點和痛點。雖然託福的獨立寫作話題往往圍繞着一些日常熱議的話題，並且大多數學生拿到題目都是有表達欲的，但這種表達欲往往幾句話就表達完了。因此就出現了學生常常問到的一個問題“老師，我的作文寫不長怎麼辦?”

站在學生的角度，30分鐘的寫作就像是一次沒有任何人陪伴的旅行。很多學生在寫作過程中都會“迷路”---不知道接下去還能寫些什麼?我常常也在思考：如果我是學生，我在考試的時候最需要一個什麼樣的“工具”來幫助我在“迷路”的情況下找到方向。就好像我們到任何一個陌生的城市，在沒有熟人幫忙的情況下，只需要打開手機裏的Google map定位導航，手機就會提供幾種可行的路線方案供選擇。那麼，在託福寫作中有沒有這樣一種能幫學生定位並且導航的工具幫助學生在考場作文中仍然能夠找到方向不至於迷失呢?其實是有的，這個隱藏在英語作文中的GPS導航工具就是“邏輯關係詞”。

GPS=左轉彎/右轉彎/直行/掉頭

正如谷歌地圖會指導我們“左轉彎/右轉彎/直行/掉頭”最終到達我們的目的地一樣，託福作文中的邏輯關係詞也是一步步引導學生完成文章的寫作的。那麼它們是如何引導學生一點點將文章段落展開的呢?大家可以思考一下，很多時候我們文章寫不長的`原因是因為什麼?是不是因為寫了一句，後面不知道還能接什麼?那麼我們思考一下句子與句子之間都有什麼基本的關係?這些關係詞是不是就可以成為我們“接下去寫些什麼“的提示詞呢?

句間邏輯=因為…所以…/雖然…但是…/如果…那麼…/舉例來説…/數據顯示…

託福寫作中，正是這些邏輯關係詞默默地將文章的片段編織成一個整體，而這一個個邏輯關係詞就是我們在寫作中的GPS導航工具。當我們思維枯竭的時候，就可以把你的託福寫作GPS(邏輯關係詞)打開。這樣一來，就會有好幾個可能繼續走下去的路口擺在面前。

因果-This is efore，...

對比-Instead of A, which is… ,B…;By contrast,...

假設-Suppose...

舉例-For example，...

數據-Statistics show that...

當然，託福寫作中的邏輯連接詞並不僅限於以上所羅列的這些，只要童鞋們考前充分準備，就可以給自己在托福考場中準備更多地選擇。熟練掌握運用託福寫作段落隱藏的GPS導航工具---邏輯關係詞，300+字對你來説，只是小菜一碟～

It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

參考分析：

同意新飯館建立:增加就業;提供一個好的休閒娛樂場所;貢獻税收，改進社區。

A new restaurant in my neighborhood would be the most exciting event for me. I personally have positive feelings towards this proposal and also believe that the people of my neighborhood shall also feel excited about such an event.

Life in the fast lane today has turned out to be so hectic and tedious to us that at times we feel exhausted and therefore unwilling to prepare our food. We also feel a strong urge towards a change in the type and flavor of food that we eat. A new restaurant at such times nearby shall make a difference to our lives.

In occasions of happiness, get-togethers and enjoyment, having a restaurant nearby is always a convenience for people here. For example, the restaurant can be a convenient place to hold a wedding reception, or a birthday ceremony. A new restaurant shall certainly add lots of enthusiasms and excitements to people here and people who have the greatest amount of enjoyment would be the younger people. They can relax in a new environment with the experience of a new atmosphere and people around and most of all, tasting something new. On the other hand, a new restaurant in our neighborhood gives hope to young people who would like to make money through a part time or full time job.

In conclusion, a new restaurant will bring convenience to our community. So I personally welcome such a plan.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

參考分析：

討論做leader的好處：主動，可以操縱更多的資源，獲得更多;缺點：風險大;討論做member的好處：安逸;沒有風險;缺點：收穫較小。做leader和member一定程度上與一個人的性格有關。另外，還要看是做什麼的group。視情況而定。

According to my opinion, it is always better to be a leader than a follower. True leader show initiative. They take actions and they assume responsibilities. A leader makes a decision. Some followers may approve of the decision, others may complain about it. However, these followers all chose to follow, not to lead. They chose not to make a decision. That's how I am different. I am not a follower. I want to make decisions.

A good leader will not react to events, but will anticipate them. A leader will start a plan of action and then will persuade others to follow. For example, a class president at a local college may feel that the relationship between the community and the campus is not a good one. The citizens may feel that the college kids make too much noise on the street, litter public areas, and shop in other communities. A good class president will recognize that the community and the campus depend on one another. The president will ask the student body to keep noise down, help clean up the neighborhood, and work with businesses to attract students. A good leader takes the initiative.

Good leaders must be action-oriented. Having taken the initiative, they must see the job though. They have to take charge and lead the followers. They have to motivate and encourage the followers. The followers (in this example, the student body) must understand why good relations with the community are necessary. The followers must be persuaded to do something about it.

I enjoy taking the initiative, determining the direction, and being responsible for my actions. I do not want to suffer through other people's stupid decisions. If there are going to be stupid ways to do something, let them be mine. Would not you agree?