GRE作文範文講解:開門見山的表達觀點

Issue 1

We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our greement can cause stress and inhibit learning。

Do we learn more from people whose ideas we share in common than from those whose ideas contradict ours? The speaker claims so， for the reason that disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning.I concede that undue discord can impede rwise,in my view we learn far more from discourse and debate with those whose ideas we oppose than from people whose ideas are in accord with our own.

在第一段，作者開門見山地表達自己的觀點conditionally disagree。這一點值得大家借鑑。但由於寫的倉促，依然有措辭的失誤。

Admittedly， under some circumstances disagreement with others can be counterproductive to learning。 For supporting examples one need look no further than a television set。 On todays typical television or radio talk show， disagreement usually manifests itself in meaningless rhetorical bouts and shouting matches， during which opponents vie to have their own message heard， but have little interest either in finding common ground with or in acknowledging the merits of the opponents viewpoint。 Understandably， neither the combatants nor the viewers learn anything meaningful。 In fact， these battles only serve to reinforce the predispositions and biases of all concerned。 The end result is that learning is impeded。