國中英語作文《I love my school》評析

I love my school

My school is very big with several tall e are about 800 students in it have a big playground with a lot trees around summer ,there are all kinds of flowers everywhere. We have a lot of fun at school. During the breaks,we play games and do sports,such as playing basketball, football and table tennis. All of us students can study hard, obey the school rules ,take care of the school environment. There are many interesting activities for us to take part in. The teachers in the school are kind to us just like our my heart, the school is like a big family. I like my school and feel proud of it.

1.文章書寫形式不規範，希望注意。

2.“there are …”句首字母要大寫。應改為.“There are …”.

school is very big with several tall buildings.“with”用得恰到好處。

e are many interesting activities for us to take part in. 運用了不定式作後置定語，很好。

my heart, the school is like a big family. 比喻恰當。

文章語句連貫、流暢，句意完整，能利用較複雜的'句式結構表達思想，基本功紮實、雄厚。不足之處在今後學習中要注意標點符號及字母大小寫等細微問題。

總體上看是一篇優秀的文章。