2015大學聯考英語滿分作文：諮詢情況

假定你是李華，正是英國牛津參加短期語言培訓，計劃星期天去倫敦旅遊。互聯網上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確(箭頭所指內容)。請給該旅行社發一封電子郵件，詢問有關情況。

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詞數100左右，信的格式已為你寫好。

2.可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

3.參考詞彙：牛津——Oxford 費用——fee

Dear Sir/Madame,

I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.

As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?

How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.

Yours,

Li Hua

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是根據畫面的'提示來寫一封電子郵件。在文章中首先把握了全部的要點，敍述較為完整;其次，運用一些過渡句和銜接詞將文章串聯，意思連貫。文章中採用了第一人稱和一般現在時，這是值得肯定的地方。