國中英語寫作訓練案例

英語寫作一直拿不到高分?本站小編已經收集整理好國中英語寫作訓練案例，歡迎學習參考!

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英語課代表分發試卷的時候發現了一份沒有署名的試卷，成績為滿分。請你幫助課代表分析它會時誰的。

要求：1.設想當時的情景，適當擴展細節;

2.書寫工整，100詞左右。

參考詞彙：top student優等生;handwriting筆跡;full marks滿分

【優秀滿分範文】

we had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out. There’s a paper without a name on it and that student got full marks.

Whom can it belong to? It can’t be a boy’s, because none of them in class can be so good and tidy. The paper must belong to a girl because its handwriting is very tidy. There are only three girls who are good at handwriting — Rose, Mary and Lucy. It might belong to Rose, but I’m not sure because she is not so good at English. It can’t be Mary’s. Although she is a top student in English, she has already had hers in hand. So it must belong to Lucy. Today she is ill at home and she does well in English, too. Well, it must belong to her.

　　2.

現在很多中學生都喜歡流行歌曲。請你根據下面的調查結果，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

【優秀滿分範文】

Nowadays more and more middle school students like pop songs.

A few of them like quiet music because they think quiet music makes them feel comfortable. Many of the students like musicians who can write their own lyrics. Why? They think it’s cool to express their own feelings. Most of the students like music that they can dance to. They think the music is full of energy. When they are tired or bored, they can dance to the music.

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假如你是郭佳，你的美國筆友Linda給你寫了一封信，説她想給自己的漢語老師送一份禮物來表達自己的感激之情，但是她不知道中國的送禮習俗，所以請你給她一些建議。請根據下面的提示，用英語寫一封回信給她。

提示：1.要根據個人喜好選擇禮物;

2.禮物的包裝不要使用白色或者黑色包裝紙(wrapping paper);

3.不要送鍾、鞋或者梨。

要求：1.語意通順，條理清楚;

2.80詞左右。(信的格式和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數)

【優秀滿分範文】

Dear Linda,

I am glad to give you advice on the customs of giving gifts in my country.

Firstly, I think you need to find out what your Chinese teacher likes. Choosing the gift that your teacher is interested in is a good idea. Secondly, don’t pack the gift with black or white wrapping paper, because black and white aren’t considered to be lucky colors. Thirdly, don’t buy your teacher a clock, a pair of shoes, or some pears because these have bad meanings in Chinese when giving a gift.

I hope my advice can help you.

Yours,

Guo Jia

　　4.

剛到中國來學習不久的John應漢語老師的`邀請去他家裏做客，因此John 向Bob請教相關禮儀。假設你是Bob,請你給John回一封電子郵件，告訴他一些注意事項。80詞左右，開頭已給出(不計入總詞數)。

【優秀滿分範文】

Dear John,

I know that you will visit your Chinese teacher’s home. If you do the following, I don’t think you will feel uncomfortable.

First, you should arrive a little earlier. Being late is impolite. Second, it’s also good to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit. Third, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner. Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food. You’d better say that the food is delicious while you are eating. Finally, after dinner, showing thanks is also necessary. And you are not supposed to stay long after dinner.

Good luck!

Yours,

Bob

　　5.

假設上週六晚上，你們全家在一家飯店就餐。請你根據以下要點提示，用英語寫一篇短文，描述事情發生的經過，並適當加以評論。

要點提示：

1.鄰桌年輕人大聲説話、吸煙。

2.你請他們不要那樣做。

3.他們不聽，反而嘲笑你。

4.你認為：他們在公共場所那樣做是不對的。

年輕人是祖國的未來，應該......

參考詞彙：嘲笑laugh at

要求：

1.詞數80左右，短文開頭已給出(不計入總詞數)。

2.要點齊全，行為連貫，可適當發揮。

【優秀滿分範文】

Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a resturant.

We enjoyed ourselves while we were at table. However, some teenagers sitting beside our table began to talk and laugh loudly. What’s worse, they began to smoke in the restaurant, which made us angry. After a while, I stood up and advised them to stop smoking and behave themselves. To my surprise, they didn’t follow my suggestions. Instead, they laughed at me, saying that I was too young and too naive.

In my opinion, it’s wrong to do that in public. The future of our courtry lies in teenagers, who should not only obey the rules in public but also make contributions to the society.

　　6.

健康對我們來説非常重要，我們可以用很多方法來保持身體健康。請根據下面表格的提示，以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，倡議“健康生活”，從三個方面説明如何保持健康。短文首句已給出，不計入總詞數，可適當發揮。

【優秀滿分範文】

Good Ways to Keep Healthy

It is very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy?

First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat. Different kinds of food are necessary, it’s also important to eat a balanced diet.

Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit. We can take walks after dinner, we can walk to school instead of taking a bus, after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends. We should try to do more exercise every day.

Happiness is another way to keep healthy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends. It is a good way to keep us happy. If you smile often, you also feel happy. So, be happy to be healthy.

　　7.

健康一直是人們關注的問題，我校要舉行以“關愛健康”為主題的主題班會，請根據以下內容談談你的看法。

1. 保持健康的重要性;

2. 保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜;每天鍛鍊一小時;早睡早起;勤洗手;

3. 自己的看法(至少一條)。

注意：1.文中不能出現校名和自己的姓名;2.內容可適當擴展。3.字數60-80詞;4.文章開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。

【優秀滿分範文】

Boys and girls,

It is very important for us students to keep healthy.

There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn't drink wine or smoke are bad for our health.

Thank you.

　　8.

近20年來，各方面的調查表明：青少年的體質不斷下降。請你以“How to keep healty”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，説説你的看法和建議。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

主要內容包括：

1.體質下降的原因。如：eat too much junk food, have too much homework...

2.合理的健康建議。如：should do more exercise, eat a balanced diet(飲食平衡), enough sleep...

【優秀滿分範文】

How to keep healthy

Nowadays students’ physical fitness is declining year by year. I think there are some reasons.

Students have too much homework to do, so they have little time to have sports. Some students eat too much junk food. That’s also bad for their health.

Then, how to keep healthy? Here is some useful advice. First, students should do more exercise. Second, students should eat a balanced diet. They should eat more vegetables and fruits, and try to eat less junk food. Finally, enough sleep is also very important.

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節約資源，保護環境，從身邊的小事做起。作為一名學生，我們應該怎樣看待“低碳”生活?請以“My low — carbon life”為題寫一篇短文，簡述自己對“低碳”生活的理解及看法。80詞左右。

提示：1.步行或騎自行車上學;

2.節約用水;

3.不用塑料袋;

4.節約用電;

5.充分使用紙張。

參考詞彙：on foot, turn off, recycle, make full use of, plastic bag, tap

【優秀滿分範文】

My low-carbon life

Now the human living environment is becoming worse and worse. So a new lifestyle called low-carbon life is spreading to every part of our country. As middle school students, how can we have a low-carbon life?

Firstly, we can go to school on foot or by bike. Secondly, we shouldn’t waste water or electricity. Do remember to turn off the lights when we leave the room and turn off the tap in time after using it. Thirdly, we should use colth bags in our daily life instead of plastic ones. Fourthly, we should also make full use of paper. We’d better recycle some of our textbooks.

It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.

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為配合我市“禮儀宜賓(Charm Yibin)”活動的開展，某學校開展以“How to behave well?”為主題的英語作文，請你以一名中學生的身份寫一篇60-80詞的短文參賽。

內容包括：1.守時，不説髒話;2.禮貌待人，熱心助人;3.遵守交通規則，不亂扔垃圾;

注意：1.文中不能出現校名和自己的姓名;2.內容可適當擴充。

【優秀滿分範文】

How to behave well?

As a student in Yibin, we should behave well.

First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.

Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life.