雅思寫作中的高危句式

不要總以有生命的.名詞和人稱代詞開頭(受漢語表達習慣的影響, to use I, People and We, 開頭);

不要千篇一律的使用主動語態;

不要總是用(如果)(因為)(當)等口語意味較重的句子，要注意使用書面語體的句子;

不要對動詞過分依賴，要學會用動詞名詞化來表達;

不用總是用肯定句來表達，要學會用否定句子表達肯定的意思;

恰當的使用排比句和平行句

Many people think birth control is quite necessary in China.

We are making great efforts to improve our English.

If you compare bicycles with cars carefully, you will find bicycles are superior to cars.

If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good results.

The style. of living has become more and more popular and accepted by more and more young people.

Every young boy and girl wants to earn a little money to help cover higher college cost.

Whenever you pick up a newspaper, you will always find advertisement.