中學英語滿分作文範文

Ⅲ 寫作(共兩節，滿分40分)

第一節 基礎寫作(共1小題;滿分15分)

你接受了一項寫作任務，要為英語校報寫一篇人物介紹。

請根據以下信息，介紹一位傳奇人物。

姓 名：Allan Stewart

國 籍：澳大利亞

出生日期：1915年3月7日

世界紀錄：2006年獲碩士學位*時年齡最大

學習態度：挑戰自我，永遠為時不晚。

第一個學位：1936年獲得

第二個學位：醫學博士**

第三個學位：80多歲時決定學習法律，2006年獲得碩士學位。

第四個學位：2012年通過網絡學習獲得，善於合理安排學習時間，受到老師表揚。

*碩士學位：master's degree;**博士：doctor

只能用5個句子表達全部內容。

句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章連貫。

滿分作文1

Allan Stewart, born on 7th March, 1915 in Australia, got his first degree in 1936 and then became a Doctor of Medicine.

斯圖爾特艾倫，出生於第七日，1915在澳大利亞，獲得了他的第一個學位，在1936，然後成為一名醫生。

In 2006, he got his third degree—master’s degree and created a world record, for he was the oldest one.

在2006，他得到了他的第三度碩士學位，並創造了世界紀錄，因為他是最古老的。

In his eighties he was determined to study law and in 2012 he got his fourth degree through his learning from the network. And he was good at reasonable arrangements for study time, so he was praised by his teachers. He strongly believes that it’s a self-chanllenge and nerver too late.

在他八十年代，他下定決心要學習法律，2012歲的他通過網絡學習獲得了第四個學位。他在合理安排學習時間，所以受到了老師的表揚。他堅信，這是一種自我的挑戰，不要太晚。

I like reading in my free time. I’ve read all kinds of books which are written by many famous writers from all over the world. But I like a Chinese writer best. His name is Xu Zimo.

在我空閒時我喜歡閲讀。我已經讀過很多來自世界各國的著名作家寫的各種各樣的書。不過，我最喜歡的一個作家是中國的。他的名字叫徐志摩。

Xu Zhimo was born in a big family. His parents were good at writing and his father taught little Xu by himself. When Xu Zhimo was very young, he was interested in reading. Fables, stories or novels were his favorites and he often nearly forgot eating and Xu was about six years old, he began to write some short stories. He was always practising writing and he did better and better. But he still kept on reading, because he always believed that “Reading makes a full man, a ready man and an exact man.”

徐志摩出生在一個大家庭。他的父母都擅長寫作，他的父親親自教導他。徐志摩年輕時，他對閲讀很感興趣。寓言、故事或小説是他的最愛，為了這些他經常差點忘了吃和睡。當徐大約六歲時，他開始寫一些短篇故事。他總是練習寫作，他也寫得越好越好。但他仍不停地閲讀，因為他總是相信“閲讀使人充實,使人機敏和使人嚴謹。”

When he grew up, his life dream came true. He became a world-famous writer. Not only Chinese but also people from other countries worshiped Xu Zimo. His writing was enjoyed by all the people. Everybody thought that Xu’s works were so nice and great. From his writing, people can understand a lot. I have learnt that if someone wants to be a great person, he must work hard!

當他長大後,他的夢想實現了。他成為了一個世界聞名的作家。不僅中國還有來自其它國家的人崇拜徐志摩。他的作品受到很多人的喜愛。每個人都認為徐的作品是如此美好和偉大的。從他的作品中，人們懂得了很多。我懂得了如果一個人想成為一個偉大的人,他必須努力工作!

Now, let’s enjoy one of Xu’s verses:On Leaving Cambridge Again Quietly I leave, as quietly I came here, quietly I take my wave to the rosy clouds in the werstern sky

現在,讓我們欣賞徐志摩的其中一首詩：再別康橋，輕輕的我走了，正如我輕輕的來;我輕輕的招手，作別西天的`雲彩。

題目：

安徽黃山被聯合國教科文組織定為世界自然文化遺產。假設外國友人到你校參觀後，準備去旅遊。請根據要點向外國友人簡單介紹黃山（ the Yellow Mountain ）。

（ 1 ）位於安徽南部，是中國著名的旅遊勝地。每年有大批中外遊客前去旅遊觀光。（ 2 ）乘汽車去大約要花 3 個小時；也可以乘火車或飛機去。（ 3 ）登山便可領略其雲海（ the sea of clouds ）、奇鬆（ wondrous pines ）、怪石（ unique rocks ）等秀麗的風景及清晨美麗的日出。

注意 1 ?詞數： 80 詞左右。 2 ?請不要逐字翻譯。

滿分作文：

The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui. Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It‘s not far from here. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus. You can also go there by train or by plane. While you are climbing the mountain， you can enjoy the sea of clouds， wondrous pines and unique rocks around you. In the early morning when the sun rises， the sky looks very beautiful. It’s really a nice place to visit.

黃山是中國最著名的山脈。它位於安徽南部。每年都有成千上萬的中國人和外國人那裏參觀。離這兒不遠。大約要三個小時，乘公共汽車到那裏。你也可以乘火車或飛機去。當你爬山時，你可以享受的雲海，奇妙獨特的松樹和你周圍的巖石。清晨，當太陽升起的時候，天空看起來非常漂亮。這真是一個很好的地方。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have learned from an advertisement that your company is in need of a secretary. I would like you to consider me for the position.

My name is Li Min. I am twenty-three years old. I am studying business management in Xiamen University. I will graduate this summer. I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me do the office work very well. And I have learned English for ten the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper of my department. My grades come out top in my department. What's more, I like office work very much and I also think that I can be competent for the I could have the opportunity to get the job I will be quite appreciative.

Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully

Li Min

親愛的先生或女士：

我從一則廣告上得知你們公司需要祕書。我希望您考慮一下我。

我叫李敏，23歲，現在在廈門大學學習經濟管理，今年夏季即將畢業。我精通計算機操作及辦公軟件的使用，這可以幫助我做好辦公室工作。我學了十年英語。在過去的兩年裏我一直擔任本系英語報的一名編輯。我的成績在系裏名列前茅。另外，我非常喜歡辦公室工作並且我也認為我能勝任這個工作。如果我能有機會得到這份工作，我會非常感激。

謝謝您的考慮。我盼望着您的回信。

您忠實的朋友 李敏

【試題回放】

一家賓館新開業，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯網上進行宣傳。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內容包括：

1.地點：距白山入口處500米;

2.房間及價格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費開放; 5.歡迎預定。

注意：1.詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

歡迎光臨白山山賓館！

白山酒店正式開張營業。

500米遠的白山入口處，它提供單人房間，它的價格是100元／天，號碼是20，和15個雙人間，一個價格150元人民幣/天。它還提供熱水澡服務。你可以在餐廳裏享受中西方的食物，在咖啡館喝咖啡和茶。游泳池是免費開放的一天。所有這些服務都能給你帶來極大的方便，而且非常愉快。所以來享受你自己！

歡迎來到白山預訂房間。

【名師點評】

本文開門見山，首先點明瞭主旨。本文最大的特點是應用了很多比較複雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨立結構交代賓館位置。which引導的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。總地來説，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。

積累卡片英漢互譯

好詞1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有這些服務都會給你帶來便利，並且非常的愉快。

評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。

The seats in our school reading-room are not enough for all the students. Many people get there very early to "seize" a seat every day. So do I. One day a "special" thing happened to me. And I learned a lesson that I shall never forget.

It happened on a Wednesday morning last January, just before our final examation. I got to the reading-room very early to occupy a seat. I put a book on the desk and then went to have breakfast. But when I hurried back into the reading-room, I found someone was sitting on the seat which I had occupied in advance. I ran to him immediatly and shouted at him angrily, "Go away. It's my seat." Everyone raised their eyes and stared at me unfriendly. My face turned red and I felt ashamed of myself. I took my book and fled helter-skelter before so many eyes.

I dared not go to the reading-room for several days. I learned a lesson in the reading-room. Since then I have been keeping the lesson in mind: To be polite to everyone.

我們學校閲覽室裏的座位不多。每天很多人都很早就去“搶”座，我也是如此。一天，我經歷了一件特殊的事，並從中學到了令我終生難忘的教訓。

這件事發生在去年一月份一個星期三的早晨，就在期末考試之前。我很早就到閲覽室佔了一個座位，然後去吃早飯。但當我匆忙返回到閲覽室時，卻發現一個人正坐在我佔的座位上。我立即跑過去，對他生氣地嚷道：“走開，這是我的座位。”閲覽室裏所有的人都抬起頭來，異樣地看着我。我的臉一下子變紅了，我為自己的行為感到慚愧。在眾目睽睽之下，我拿起書狼狽地跑了出去。

一連好幾天，我都不敢去閲覽室。我在閲覽室裏得到了一個教訓。從那以後，我一直銘記着這個教訓：禮貌地對待每個人。

The seats in our school reading-room are not enough for all the students. In order to "seize" a seat, I go there very early every morning. Just because of this, a special story happened to me one day. I learned a lesson in the reading-room that I will remember all my life.

It took place on a Monday morning in October. After occupying a seat in the reading-room, I went to fetch a bottle of boiled water. When I returned to the reading-room, I found that a girl student was sitting on my seat. Immediately I ran to her and shouted at her angrily, "Why have you taken my seat? Go away.!" Everybody in the reading-room looked up from their books at me unfriendly. At once I brushed with shame. I rushed out of the reading-room with my book. I can never forget those "eyes".

This is the lesson I've learned in the reading-room: I shall respect other people.

我們學校閲覽室裏的座位不是很多。為了“搶”座位，我每天早晨很早就去閲覽室。正是因為這個，我經歷了一件很特殊的事。我在閲覽室裏學到一個終生難忘的教訓。

這件事發生在十月的一個星期一的早晨。佔了一個座位後，我就去打瓶開水，回來時卻發現一位女生正坐在我的位置上。我立即跑了過去，生氣地嚷道：“為什麼坐我的座位?讓開!”閲覽室裏所有的人都抬起頭，異樣地看着我。我很羞愧，臉一下子就紅了。我拿起書，衝出了閲覽室。我永遠都不會忘記那些眼睛。