英語四級作文的優秀範文示例

四級考試，如何能夠獲得作文高分？下面是英語四級作文的優秀範文示例，為大家提供參考。

1. 現在有很多青少年出國留學

2 有些人認為這種做法是有益的

3 我的觀點

【範文】

Recently it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad, there are more and more-teenagers who study in high schools or even elementary schools. Many people, especially the parents, think it will certainly do good to their chidren because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance. Moreover, the quality of overseas education is often higher, thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future.

After careful consideration, I have to say the above view is more than biased. On the one hand, early independent life is not necessarily good, if the child cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. On the other hand, the educational quality is also a question—too many foreign schools aim at earning money. When the children come back, who can guarantee that they can adapt to the fierce competition here?

We can see clearly that although teenagers' studying abroad may bring favorable results, there are still a lot to worry about. It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investigation before going abroad.

【點評】

第一段指出當前某種普遍的做法，之後分兩點闡述人們支持這種做法的原因;第二段首句鮮明地指出自己反駁的意見，然後分兩點來闡述理由;最後一段進行總結，並請當事人在做出決定前多加斟酌。

範文首句點題，指出青少年留學這一現象，並給出支持者的理由，即獨立的生活會教會他們自信和堅持不懈，而且國外的教學水平會讓學生進入更好的大學、找到更好的工作。第二段給出反對理由。首先，早期獨立不一定是件好事。另外，太多的國外學校的目標是掙錢，所以它們的教學質量是令人質疑的'。末段總結説青少年留學可能會帶來好處，但令人擔憂的問題也很多。

第一段第三句中的stand a better chance of表示“有更好的機會做某事”。第二段首句中的biased表示“偏激的，存有偏見的”;第三句中的aim at表示“目的在於”;第四句中的guarantee表示“保證”，adapt to表示“適應”，fierce表示“激烈的”，修飾competition(競爭)。

1. 近年來網絡語言在青少年中很流行

2. 人們對這一現象看法不同

3. 我的看法

Internet Slang

Internet slang such as LOL (laughing out loud) and ROFL (rolling on the floor laughing) enjoys great popularity among teenagers nowadays. In fact, it becomes so popular that many terms now cross from computer-mediated communication to face-to-face communication. Some teenagers even use them in essay writing.

People have different opinions towards this phenomenon. Some people say that it will help enrich the language system and make language diverse. But others disagree, saying that these new words, being abbreviations for existing, long-used phrases, don’t “enrich” anything; they just shorten it and their total effect on language will be trivial.

In my opinion, Internet slang has little effect on language in general, but will greatly influence individuals’, especially teenagers’ language development. The reason is that overuse of Internet slang will lead to the lack of proper punctuations and grammar and has numerous misspellings in writing. That will drastically reduce chances of employment when students graduate and seek jobs. So, for the sake of their future, teenagers had better refrain from Internet slang.

1. 現在網絡公開課很盛行

2. 網絡公開課有不少好處，也存在一些問題

3. 我對此的建議

Open Courses

Online open courses are gaining popularity in recent years. Following globally famous universities like Yale and Harvard, some universities in China have also started to offer online open courses. Those courses have attracted people from all classes with different occupations.

The courses have brought many benefits to people. Many of the courses are provided by universities in foreign countries, and thus offer fresh ideas to us. Through them, we can keep up with what people are thinking all over the world. But that can also be a problem. Some of the courses may not be very suitable for Chinese students because of cultural differences and may cause chaos on Chinese campus.

In my opinion, online open course is useful and we should make use of it to broaden our horizons. But we should also remember to have our own thinking and not be brainwashed by improper ideas.

Young People Should Have Ideals

What are you going to do when you grow up? When I was a child, people often asked me this question about the ideal. Undoubtedly, every individual, especially a young person, should have an ideal. Hardly can we find any great people we know ideal when they were young.

An ideal is a vital importance to one's growth and success. On the one hand, an ideal is the target of one's life. Once you decide what your ideal is, you know where to go, and which way to take. Otherwise, you might become puzzled in many things in your life. On the other hand, an ideal is like the engine of vehicles. Only when we have our own ideals, can we find the origin of energy and enthusiasm in life, and become active and perseverant. Whatever your ideal is, careful plan and preparation is vital to its realization. Of course, the path from where you are to where you want to get is not always smooth and straight. Therefore, an optimistic, positive mind is indispensable in the process of your persevering your ideal.

In a word, only if you have an ideal, you will have the chance of realizing it.

1. 現在大學生讀雙學位的現象很常見

2. 我對這一現象的看法

【作文範文】

Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students to have two majors at the same time. In this way, they can get double BA degrees when they graduate from the university several years later.

Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole. To begin with, most students will become more hardworking and efficient in order to finish the learning tasks satisfactorily. Moreover, with two degrees at hand after graduation, they will stand a better chance in the job market full of fierce competition. In the third place, as for today's university students, tuition and fees are becoming more and more expensive. If they can make achievements in study at school and find a satisfactory job afterwards, it will not be a big problem.

Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding. This system not only compels students to work hard, but also prepares them for the coming competition.

【點評】

首段直接點題，説明現象;第二段分述三個優點，其中首句為讓步狀語從句，意思是“雖然可能帶來負面的後果，但總體上是有益的”;第三段呼應第二段，得出結論。

範文首段提出大學生讀雙學位這一普遍現象;第二段分三點進行論述，其中前兩點是優點，即學生會更加勤奮，並且有利於他們在激烈的求職市場中找到工作，最後一點是解釋可能帶來的學費問題並不嚴重;第三段下結論，呼應第二段。

第二段第三句中的stand a better chance(of)表示“大有希望”;第三段末句中的compel do sth.表示“迫使某人做某事”。