2016年託福寫作高分怎麼來

在托福考試中，如果作文可以拿高分，那麼托福考試通過的機率又會增加一成。本文將告訴大家如何在託福寫作中拿到高分作文。

無論是託福還是雅思寫作，在寫作中儘量使得文章簡潔，語言表達自然，還有結構清晰總是獲得高分的不變的技巧，簡潔是託福寫作非常重要的一點，很多考生往往在追求字數或是繁瑣句式的原因導致自己的託福文章非常囉嗦，考官印象總是不好的，分數就相對會拉低了

　　建議一： 避免空洞的單詞和詞組

1. 在託福寫作中，一些空洞的`單詞或詞組根本不能為句子帶來任何相關的或重要的信息，完全可以被刪掉。比如下面的句子：

When all things are considered， young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents， in my opinion.

這句話當中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都顯得多餘。完全可以去掉。改為：

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

2. 有些空洞和繁瑣的表達方式可以進行替換，例如：

Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

“due to the fact that”就是一個很典型的繁瑣的表達方式的例子，可以替換，簡化為下面的表達方式：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have now.

　　建議二： 避免重複

1. 在託福寫作中，儘量避免重複使用同樣的詞彙。或者有的時候雖然詞彙沒有重複，但意思卻有重複。這時候可以做一些簡化的工作。例如下面這個例子：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

large 對一個farm來説就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改為：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

更簡潔的表達方式為：

My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

2. 有時一個詞組可以用一個更簡單的單詞來替換，例如：

My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.

這裏的over and over again就可以改為repeatedly，顯得更為簡潔：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.